Preliminary exercise learner response
Preliminary exercise learner response 1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. Teacher's feedback: Only 25 seconds but lots to credit – there is a great concept here and the potential for a brilliant production. I love the old video effect and the narrative is established at the beginning too. Great to see the graphic at the start – title, artist. Should it be artist rather than directed by? Or are you going for a Taylor Swift style self-directed production? Phone shots – can work in this concept but perhaps worth playing with in post-production to fill the screen? Are you planning another scene / location / performance element for the full video? Student feedback: WWW: lots of the shots look nice good pace editing variety of different scenes/shots like the title of the video love the memories shown in the video nice and wholesome sound matched the mix of videos retro/VHS effect nicely used shots